Text, mostly ok with a half decent layout. What you have done with that image though I have no idea! They look like they have been stretched beyond recognition, and the manipulation is scruffy. Get rid of the thick black border on the left hand side as it adds nothing and makes Connor look like he has a board up his back!
You are doing ok with this, you've REALLY got to sort this image out though...it beggers belief!
You have until the 4th April for ALL of your pages to be complete and I don't want anything rushed. You have to be coming back on Wednesdays to get this done now, It's not going to work if you don't! Sorry if feedback sounds harsh, it's only because I want you to do well and I thought you'd had some formal feedback already.
Text, mostly ok with a half decent layout. What you have done with that image though I have no idea! They look like they have been stretched beyond recognition, and the manipulation is scruffy. Get rid of the thick black border on the left hand side as it adds nothing and makes Connor look like he has a board up his back!
ReplyDeleteYou are doing ok with this, you've REALLY got to sort this image out though...it beggers belief!
You have until the 4th April for ALL of your pages to be complete and I don't want anything rushed. You have to be coming back on Wednesdays to get this done now, It's not going to work if you don't! Sorry if feedback sounds harsh, it's only because I want you to do well and I thought you'd had some formal feedback already.